You’re welcome, and sure. Here you go:
In the title, the “o” in “of” shouldn’t be capitalized.
You can use this resource for proper title case:
https://capitalizemytitle.com
I guess you have no subtitle, so the first of five benefits slipped up to the subtitle spot. See how “1. It’s way better…” is above your name? That should be a sentence summarizing the article.
Typical Medium article formatting has a title, subtitle, then photo. I think it would improve upon the look of the article to add a photo at the top as well.
The spacing is a bit unusual. I’m not sure why the first two sentences are spaced as if they were stand alone paragraphs, with a line skipped between them and the following paragraph.
“From 1 ounce of wheatgrass you will get.” This period should probably be a colon.
“Decided what’s better Pill from pharmacy or nature’s own ‘MultiVitamin’” “Pill”shouldn’t be capitalized unless there’s a brand called “pill” I’m unaware of. “Nature’s Own” should be capitalized. “MultiVitamin” probably doesn’t require quotations, and if it does, it’d likely be double quotations, not single.
There’re a good deal of other grammatical mistakes. Maybe a software like grammarly would help. For example:
“You would say yeah yeah everything these days full of antioxidants, you won’t believe me most of the packaged food items do contains anti-oxidants yeah that’s true ,but sorry for popping the happy bubble but those antioxidants are not made for your body they are added in food to protect it from oxidation (sorry if you didn’t read chemistry)”
There should be a comma after say, and quotations around “yeah…antioxidants” and a period after antioxidants. Start a new sentence by capitalizing “you.” Honestly, the rest of the paragraph/sentence just needs to be reworked. There’s. a run-on sentence, grammatical mistakes, “popping the happy bubble” doesn’t really make sense as it’s written, the comma before “but” needs to be moved back a space, etc.
Hope this is helpful. Remember to read a lot in English and to study the rules of grammar daily, and maybe to get a software to help like grammarly. All the best!
